优秀的评语 the nice remarks

As a student, the teachers’ nice remarks are important to each student every term. In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.
作为一个学生，每学期老师的优秀评语对每个学生来说都是十分重要的。在我学校，我们班主任会在一个本本上给每个学生一些评语每次期末后。然后我要把它给我父母看。我们班主任会把我们期中考试和期末考试的成绩写在上面。然后他会写一些关于我们在学校的表现，以及他觉得我值得表扬的事情以及我需要改正的地方。为了过一个愉快的寒假，我得让我的父母开心。所以我总是努力尽量从班主任那里获得好的评价。在他面前，我一直都是个好男孩。所以，我总是可以得到优秀的评语。

As a student, the teachers’ nice remarks are important to each student every term. In my school, our head teacher will give his remakes for every student on a note book after final exam. And then I have to bring it to my parents. Our head teacher will put our scores of mid-term exam and final exam on it. And then he will write some remarks on us performance in the school and the thing he thinks highly of and the thing I need to correct. In order to have a good winter holiday, I have to make my parents happy. So I always try my best to earn a good evaluation from my head teacher. In front of him, I am always a good boy. So, I always have a nice remark.
作为一个学生，每学期老师的优秀评语对每个学生来说都是十分重要的。在我学校，我们班主任会在一个本本上给每个学生一些评语每次期末后。然后我要把它给我父母看。我们班主任会把我们期中考试和期末考试的成绩写在上面。然后他会写一些关于我们在学校的表现，以及他觉得我值得表扬的事情以及我需要改正的地方。为了过一个愉快的寒假，我得让我的父母开心。所以我总是努力尽量从班主任那里获得好的评价。在他面前，我一直都是个好男孩。所以，我总是可以得到优秀的评语。